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原网址:Let's Chat~【Maria Marionette | NIJISANJI EN】 - YouTube
自己烤的
以下是一点英语建议
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原文:You know how if you have like a thumbnail
修改:You know how if you have a thumbnail(like 是口头语,正式句子里不需要)
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原文:There's always at least one person that's like
修改:There's always at least one person who's like(讲人要用 who,不用 that)
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原文:"OMG, I got a heart attack because I thought this was like the..."
修改:"OMG, I had a heart attack because I thought this was like the..."(英文习惯说 had a heart attack)
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原文:Since if everybody says it every single time
修改:Since everybody says it every single time(since 和 if 一起用是语法重复,只留一个就好)
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原文:It could like dampen the artist's spirits as well on top of the stream as well
修改:It could dampen the artist's spirits as well, on top of the stream(like 是口语填充词,as well 重复了)
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原文:Just don't like comment it
修改:Just don't like comment on it(comment 不直接接 it,要用 comment on)
字幕里面“Think— keep it to yourself” 这个句子是不完整的,因为Maria在口语里说话时先冒出了一个 “Think…”,但马上改口换成 “keep it to yourself”。所以才会留下一个不完整的句子。正式英文里不能这样写,应该改成完整的句子,比如:“Please keep it to yourself.”